Total Pageviews

Wednesday 22 March 2017

ships writing

I like this ship because it has window and a flag and big and it has a pool and it has room to sleep and it has peoples.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Harpreet. It would be great to see a picture of the ship you are describing. Looking forward to reading more of your learning.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Hi Harpreet,
    Thank you for uploading your learning.
    keep up the good work.
    Miss Matthews

    ReplyDelete
  3. that's good and i like how the way you have used because .

    ReplyDelete

Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.